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Gray's Girl

Gray's Girl - Mina Carter the plot was good but it was majorily all over the place . didn't get to see the relationship develop , only got small glimpses which were not satisfactory . personally i just felt it moved way too fast for my taste which made the writing sloppy . this novel needed way more words, character development thus it was meh in terms of quality . the erotica was just there , merely 2 or 3 good love scenes before major climaxes started happened and this just took away from the story , the general plot and also the characterization making which bummed me out . i was really hoping for good erotica but sadly it was not meant to be