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I Dream of Danger: A Ghost Ops Novel

I Dream of Danger - Lisa Marie Rice Oh Lord this draagged endlessly for me . I was not connected and i was expecting so much more from this . The author has an annoying repetitiveness where she explains various events from the initial book in almost every different POV . It simply was not needed , I understand this happening at the start of the story but during right until the end was a little too much.2/3 of the story was unnecessary, I did not get to the good parts of the whole story or understood what the plot line the book was talking about until the last 1/3 which left me confused . I did not feel the book needed that starting , we already knew they hadn't seen each other in 10 years but was it really necessary to go over those 10 years? it would be done better in flash back form instead it was told like it had some great meaning to the story when in fact it did not .It simply took away from the plot and left me really confused. The plot wasn't tight enough and it did not hold the series together . Also so many different POVS were completely unnecessary , only a few writers can get away with those many different Povs for me ( namely Nalini Singh ) she does multiple POVS beautifully . Sadly i feel Ms Rice will simply need to fix editing and whole lots of mistakes inorder to make this series a success. I will try and read the next book and hopefully i will enjoy it .2 stars