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Angel on Fire (Angel Investigations)

Angel on Fire (Angel Investigations) - Jacquie Johnson Where to start with this , I rarely give reviews to 2 star reads but i felt the author needed this critique . This needs a decent amount of work for it to be as good as i thought it was gonna be . The leads weren't right meaning the heroine wasn't a bad ass , he was just normal . He cannot be normal and be painted as a military type guy that does secret work for the government . This just contradicts his whole personality . The heroine was dumb and whiny IMO , she cried for everything and for someone that worked with the FBI she could not deal with any type of dangerous situation . I can understand that she wasn't a combat soldier but an analyst. But come on she wasn't even tactful in any of dangerous suitation. She made the worst decisions . The climax wasn't even a climax, it was so dull i felt no pulsing excitement just mere boredom like for the rest of the book . The needs better polishing , the author didn't seem to know where she wanted the story to go . It just seemed that it was a contradiction all around. Disappointing and i hope the next book in this series is much better . 2 stars